A college student named Nick Lutz decided to break up with his girlfriend after cheating on him. But eventually, his ex-girlfriend wrote him an apology letter, asking Nick for forgiveness while claiming no cheating ever occured.
Nick responded his ex-girlfriend’s letter in a very savage way. He felt the best response is to pick a red pen and delivering the sickest burns ever — as in grading the apology letter sent by his ex pointing out its many errors.
The guy slammed the poor choice of words used in the apology letter and criticized the letter’s several “useless fillers.”
On his final thoughts, he wrote on the last page: “Long intro, short conclusion, strong hypothesis but nothing to back it up. Details are important. If you wanted to be believed, back it up with proof. You claimed that cheating never occurred but place blame on yourself, then what for? Need to stop contradicting your own story and pick a side. While this gesture is appreciated, I would prefer details over statements. Revision for half the credit will be accepted. Good luck!”
Source: Elitereaders
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